The lighting creates a highly dramatic effect in the opening of the box image. It has a mysterious feel, as well as an interesting angle. This image feels much more planned out than the others in the series. Without the light to highlight the hand and edges of the box, it just wouldn't show the curiosity of the character in opening the box. I also think that the motion in the first image is key in translating the idea that she was alarmed by a sound. Otherwise, it looks less as if she was suddenly alarmed.
Some type of connection needs to be further established between the hallway and opening of the door images. After hearing you explain the story, they made sense together. However, they were a bit confusing until I heard this explanation. Also, I think you might have been able to push the idea further than you were examining the box and conducting research on it. These ideas were also a bit confusing to me until the story was told during class.
The lighting and framing is gorgeous with the one of you looking into the box. Very strong.
I agree with Wendi's comment about the motion. Very strong. A little bit bright but the motion does say a lot to communicate the story. There is some very theatrical acting going on. You do well with exaggerating an emotion to portray it in a picture. Use that in the way you take pictures to tell the story better. I think that it will flow better that way.
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ReplyDeleteThe lighting creates a highly dramatic effect in the opening of the box image. It has a mysterious feel, as well as an interesting angle. This image feels much more planned out than the others in the series. Without the light to highlight the hand and edges of the box, it just wouldn't show the curiosity of the character in opening the box. I also think that the motion in the first image is key in translating the idea that she was alarmed by a sound. Otherwise, it looks less as if she was suddenly alarmed.
Some type of connection needs to be further established between the hallway and opening of the door images. After hearing you explain the story, they made sense together. However, they were a bit confusing until I heard this explanation. Also, I think you might have been able to push the idea further than you were examining the box and conducting research on it. These ideas were also a bit confusing to me until the story was told during class.
The lighting and framing is gorgeous with the one of you looking into the box. Very strong.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Wendi's comment about the motion. Very strong. A little bit bright but the motion does say a lot to communicate the story.
There is some very theatrical acting going on. You do well with exaggerating an emotion to portray it in a picture. Use that in the way you take pictures to tell the story better. I think that it will flow better that way.